がんばっていきまっしょい ～顔見えてませんからぁ、残念（古っ）～

「篠村、部員の顔良く見えてるなぁ～」って、イモッチの顔は良く見えていたかもしれんけど、
リーの顔見えてないじゃん・・・
ちょっとちょっとすごい方向に向かっているんじゃない？？
こんなことで悦ネェが権力復活させても意味ないんじゃない？？

そりゃさ～、リーがこないのも分かるよ～
あんなことされたら、友達に絶対戻れないって。高校生だよ。
いくら、リーがいい人だとしても、関係修復不可のストーリーと言っても言い過ぎではない。
っていうか、仁美コーチは何しているんだよ。

作品としても問題点がひとつある。
恋愛を深く書きすぎたあまり、ボートが上達しているように全く思えない。
サクセスストーリーを期待していた自分としては、結構期待はずれである。
毎回毎回、メンバーがちぐはぐになりながらも腕は上達していく姿が見たい。
もし、恋愛メインで話を進めるのであれば、最終回に向けての完成度は期待薄だ。

とにかく次回は、リーが戻ってくることに必然性を持たせる内容であってほしい。

それと1年生部員もう少し写してあげてもいいのではないでしょうか・・・
内君が写ってないと思わせる、はずしっぷりですもんね。

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